
They say breath is life,
So when I inhale I wonder
If the thought of you popping into my head
Like the draughts of air filling my lungs
is life itself,
Filling me with strength and vigour.
When I miss you
I can’t breathe,
Cause my life stands still
My heart beats faster
As the blood in my veins
seeks oxygenation.
The longer from me you stay
So the life ebbs from me,
So the air evades my breath,
So I gasp for you,
To fill me, to save me from emotional death.
#icantmarryapoetchallenge

Amazing work!❤️
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Beautiful just beautiful
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Thank you.
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Beautiful!! This reminds me of the song “Breathing” by Jason Derulo. I highly recommend you listen to it, as your post captures it!
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Thank you. I sure will
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Wow!! I love the imagery in this, the way oxygen, the heart and the lungs are used to describe the emotions of love 💖
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Thanks!
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It’s always a pleasure 🌺
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Beautiful 💖
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Thanks
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Pleasure
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Very good! I loved it.
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Thanks
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Superb. The picture underwater made me hold my breath for a second. Great post.
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Thank you.
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